Wednesday, March 2, 2016

Writing Challenge Jonatan and Nick

Pyro-fire:
When I woke up I saw a pyromaniac burning the snow away from his driveway. Which scared me because I have a severe case of pyrophobia. I remember 3 months ago I had pyrogen which is a fever. My favorite flower is a pyrola which for some reason reminds me of the word ebola. I know I should not be scared of fire but I still also remember when my teacher burned me when we were learning about pyrology.

Phobia-fear of:

Hi my name is Joe and I’ve had pyrophobia since my teacher burned me. I also have arachnophobia which is being scared of spiders. There are so many things to be afraid of like cryophobia because ice is so cold and could hurt someone. Sometimes I am a xenophobe (xenophobia) which is disliking people from other countries. Zombie are also scary, I swear some day the apocalypse is coming, some people say I have kinemortophobia.

Monday, February 8, 2016

Wild and Precious life.

What I want to do with my wild life is to graduate school. Get a good Paying job and take care of my parents. Maybe get a house or an apartment. Or go live in another country or city. Maybe even become a famous chef.That is what I would do with my wild andprecious life.

Thursday, November 19, 2015

I can't think of a title

Justin was dreaming of a fiery explosion with a car and a truck until something wet crawled up the side of his leg.  Justin woke up startled and flung Lucifer (Justin's cat) out of his bed.  He turned on the lights in his room and saw that Lucifer left a huge puddle of pee in the middle of the bed.  Justin looked at Lucifer and put his foot under him and flung him out of the room.  Justin had to take the bed sheet and the blanket out of the bed.

       It was 6:30 and he had to go to school at 6:50. The school was 40 minutes away and he was alone in the house. So he packed his stuff and started to run he barely made it. He only had 30 seconds to get to class but luckily the class was across his locker. He ran across and jumped in before the bell rang and Mr. Ivery told him why he was drenched in sweat. Justin explained what happened to him. Mr .Ivery told him to go to the bathroom to freshen up and to take a sip of water while he was down there. While Justin was in the bathroom he overheard two high schoolers talking about the dance in december. He then thought about if he wanted to go but decided to not go.  He came back to the classroom and the teacher told him to open his notebook he told him the lesson was about narrative writing and they were going to start writing their story in 1 week so that he could get any ideas. The bell rang and Justin was thinking what would he write about for his story.

He went down to the locker room in gym and put his shorts and long socks on. He did not put his cleats on because he could not wear them inside of school. He went outside the school and put his cleats on.His cleats were new they were the nike mercurial superfly pro that were dark blue,light blue,  yellow flare,with a black nike sign, his cleats cost about 285.99.He looked at them and was amazed at how beautiful they were. The team had an away game against Overbrook it took the bus to get their middle school 47 minutes. They were warmed up and the coach put out the positions he said all the positions with the players and Justin was happy because he was starting. Justin played Center forward, the game began in the first thirty seconds they scored two goals and the game became harder and harder for overbrook. When the game ended they won 7 to 1.

His mom came to go get him and they went back to the house. They were eating dinner until the phone rang his mom went to go get it while Justin took care of his little sister. His mom came back sobbing, she told his son that her mom got into a car crash with a bus. Justin asked if she was okay she told him no because the car she was driving exploded with a fiery crash.The police said there would be no way that she survived it the car had a full tank of gas and it exploded 11 minutes after the car flipped.

The next day he and his mom went to the car crash site.They went through the scrap if they could find anything, they found a pair of broken glasses and dentures there was no body in or outside the car.They searched the forest and they didn't find anything Justin got mad and kicked a pine tree. Some of the tree’s bark fell off and Justin kicked it again because he saw something there. He kicked it two more times and something fell out it was a note that said meet me at Oregon Ave. at 9 o’clock love Grandma Rose.

He went there it was 9:05 a car came up he could not believe who it was. It was his Grandma he quickly ran up to her car and asked how are you here I thought you were dead. She said me dead I am still not that old. Justin said then who was at the car crash that was my friend Jessica she borrowed my car to get to work but, I would never guess that she would die by a car accident. I always thought she would die by old age. Justin hugged her and said let’s go home but, she said would my daughter be mad that I let someone else use and crash my car. Justin said no because she has said that she misses you a lot.

The two went back home his mom was on the couch watching the news until she caught.A glimpse of her, both of them paused for a moment.My mom made the first move she ran and hugged her and started to cry.My grandma started to cry and said I missed you.  

Tuesday, November 3, 2015

A little something of my narrative story.

He went down to the locker room in gym and put his shorts and long socks on. He did not put his cleats on because he could not wear them inside of school. He went outside the school and put his cleats on.His cleats were new they were the Nike mercurial Superfly pro that were blue,lagoon blue, black Electro flare,with black volt,His cleats cost about 285.99.He looked at them and was amazed at how beautiful they were.


I like this portion of my story because It is so descriptive about what the character is wearing.